Curicculum Vitae
Paragraph
I like to do several things when it comes to what people said as "free time". First of all, I like reading. Due to my passion since I was in Junior High School, especially in the second grade, I am starting to read a christian book. In the first place, it is just to fill my free time. But, as the time goes by, I become addict to read and up until now, I will still read at least 1 book in a month. Second, I also like cooking. Since I was 6, my mother had told me that a girl should go to the kitchen and cook! by that command, I usually help my mom everyday. Up until now, when I went back to my hometown, I still help my mom to cook for my family. It is really good I think for girls to have several skill like cooking. Last, I love cleaning. When I saw something dirty, I will eventually move my body and cleaned it up. Sanity is really important, because from the health environment, we will live happily also and it will make us healthy. In short, I li...
hello Vicky, I've read your CV and I suggest you to only put your achievement at least from the senior high school since it will become the latest one, but you've done good CV I thought :)
BalasHapusHi, Vicky. I have read your CV and I think it is well organized. You do not just mention the point but give a brief and clear detail as well. However, in the achievement part, it will be better if you delete this one 'rank 1 the cleanest teeth'. Overall, it is such a good CV.
BalasHapusGood job, Vicky. Keep improving! ��
My dearest, Vicky. Firstly, I would like to admit that CV is “new thing” for me, therefore pardon my “lack-of-experience” when giving the comment. But, I will try my best. I believe that you have put a tons of efforts to make (perhaps) your very first CV for applying the job and you have done it really good. You have divided each section which can help the employer easy to find the information. Also, your grammar is good and you highlight your strength clearly. It is complete enough to find "you" in the CV. Nice! Need to be notice, I found several things which you may check for the revision.
BalasHapusFor the objective, I found incoherence where earlier you mentioned that you looking for intern position in EY. But then you mentioned you looking for position at PT. VIP Discount Indonesia. Also, I just found that our title is "BSc. Management", Vick .-. (sorry tho). And you forgot to write your GPA. Next, for your skills, perhaps you don't have to mentioned all of our subjects name in communication skill but rather you need to explore more what experiences that emphasize you are a good communicator. For the Teamwork skill, you need to replace the words and start to "diplomacy" your words, for instance "Supported the whole team to reach the goal through deep explanation and supervised the members". For the Numerical Skill, I found typo which it should be "Financial Management and Financial Accounting" not "Analysis". For the seminar you have joined, perhaps you may mentioned STRIB stands for what and so on. Also, you need to mentioned it little bit about what is "Japanese competition" because it is too general. Lastly, the achievement, for the Bright Scholarship, you need to mentioned it is from where and started since when also when it will be finished.
I think these all what I can give. Overall, you are great and it is good enough, even though there are several things need to be revised. I hope you can improve well~ I am looking forward for your next post. Keep improving :) Cheerio~
Hi Vicky! I have read your CV and I don't really have any comments to be honest. It's good just like the standard CV people usually make. I think you just need to be more creative on the design in order to attract the hiring team. Good luck!
BalasHapushi Vicky
BalasHapusi have read your CV. it is good. However i have a little suggestion, maybe in the communication skills part you do not have to list down all of the class presentation for each subject. good Job Vicky :)
Dear my DQ,
BalasHapuswhat a nice CV that you have made there! your cv is well arranged but I found something that unnecessary in your CV about your achievement in cleanest teeth that you have got in your elementary school?😂 but overall it's look good for me! good job and keep it up vicky😉
Hi, Vicky,
BalasHapusI think your CV is great and impressive. It is tidy enough and designed well. But I just want to say that there is a typo in the word 'achievement' which in my opinion should be 'achievements'.
Warmest regards,