I disagree that every bachelor degree in Indonesia should be an entrepreneur
I
disagree that every bachelor degree in Indonesia should be an entrepreneur
To become an entrepreneur, people should have several
core characteristics. Brave is not the only answer in order to be an
entrepreneur. Those who want to be an entrepreneur need a good connections in
daily relationships, have the ability to see the opportunities around them and
a strong mentality that ready to face the fact. If the person who want to be an
entrepreneur not have these core characteristics, I think he or she is not
qualified enough to become an entrepreneur.
First, those who want to be an entrepreneur need a good
connections in daily relationships. However, as the God created a human with
the different characteristic, each people have different character with the
other. For example, an introvert and extrovert person. As if the person is an introvert
person, he or she can not gain a good connections in daily relationships easily.
Accroding to personality psychology, someone with the introvert psychology tend
to be quite in all of the situation and domain in reserved and introspective(“Psychology,”
n.d.). In short, the statement which stated that every
bachelor degree in Indonesia should be an entrepreneur is hardly be implemented
in this case, due to the different character of man that created by God.
Second, those who
want to be an entrepreneur should have
enough “believe” to see the
opportunities in front. In Hebrew chapter 11 verse 1 stated that “now faith is
the assurance of things hoped for, the conviction
of things not seen”(By
Faith, n.d.). By this means, according to the bible said about “faith” it is clear enough that, when
you have enough “believe” or “faith”, it will settle confidence that
something in the future – something that is not yet seen will surely come in
His time. The candidate of the entrepreneur should questioning themself first before
they want to be an entrepreneur. For example, “Do I have enough faith so that
when I open this business later on, this business will run smoothly?” This kind
of abilities which can see the opportunities (confidence in the future) is very
rare seen in today’s youth. Almost all the first thing that come out from their
tought is “how can I become richer in a second?” not “Is there any
opportunities (believe / faith) in
front?”.
Third, a strong mentality to face the fact is also one of
requirement to be an entrepreneur. Looking in nowadays youth in Indonesia, many
of them do not have a strong mentality to face the fact. According to the
searching in the internet, there are still mumerous people who do not want in
facing the fact. Take an example when these bachelor degree want to make a
thesis in the end of the semester. When it comes to the thesis, they just want
to finish the thesis as soon as possible without considering the process in
making the thesis, and by that they are cheating (2015).
Due to Brown and Ward, youth especially should become an
entrepreneur (Brown,
2013; “Can Anybody Be an Entrepreneur?,” 2012). However, not all the bachelor degree in Indonesia have
a core characteristic as been stated above.
In conclusion, according to Meriam Webster, the word of
“should” have several meanings. First, used in auxiliart function to express obligation, propriety, or expediency.
Second, used in auxiliary function to express futurity from a point of view in
the past. Third, used in auxiliary function to express condition. Fourth, used
in auxiliary function to express what is probable or expected. Fifth, used in
auxiliary function to express a request in a polite manner or to soften direct
statement.(“Meriam
Webster,” n.d.) With all of the definition above, the first definition
is the most fit definition in this case. Anybody can be an entrepreneur, but
not everyone should be an entrepreneur.
References
8 Signs You Are an Introvert. (n.d.).
[Blog]. Retrieved from
https://www.verywell.com/signs-you-are-an-introvert-2795427
Brown, P. B.
(2013, October 13). 3 (More) Reasons Why Everyone Will Need To Become An
Entrepreneur. Retrieved from
https://www.forbes.com/sites/actiontrumpseverything/2013/10/13/3-more-reasons-why-everyone-will-need-to-become-an-entrepreneur-2/#37f01e5371e5
Can Anybody Be
an Entrepreneur? (2012, February 8). Retrieved from
https://www.cnbc.com/id/46311341
ESV
Study Bible. (n.d.).
Crossway.
Meriam Webster.
(n.d.). Retrieved from https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/should
serambimata.
(2015, May 23). Banyak kecurangan, skripsi tak lagi syarat lulus S1. Retrieved
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We have the same idea. And your essay is good. But you can make the outline to make it clear to read. Looking forward your next essay.
BalasHapusHello Vicky, I'm impressed by the way this essay was writing. It's beautifully structured and you successfully made me smile with how your thinking. I can't believe you able to relate this essay with psychological stuff. Anyway, I just want to give suggestion for these two sentences "Brave is not the only answer in order to be an entrepreneur." change to Being brave is not the only the answer to be an entrepreneur. and However, not all the bachelor degree in Indonesia have a core characteristic as been stated above." change to However, not all the bachelor degree in Indonesia have a core characteristic as like have been stated above. Again, you are amazing as you always to be and I hope to see more of your writing
BalasHapusHello Vicky, Glad to see your essay, I think your paragraph was well-structured, Just for suggestion and correction, My suggestion is come from this sentence "a strong mentality that ready to face the fact." I think "the fact" is not appropriate for this context so better if you change it to become "a strong mentality that ready to face the reality.". I found there are typo its like "Accroding" should become "According". That's all from me, Thank you and keep it up Vicky ^_^
BalasHapusHello Vicky,
BalasHapusI really like your topic and I think everyone who wants to open their business have to consider those things like you said.
My suggestion for you is you have to give more attention on your word because there are some wrong spelling such as mumerous (numerous) and according (according).
Overall great work
Keep it up :)
Hallo vicky:D
BalasHapusGlad to see your essay, I like it and I think this essay is so fresh and makes me think that it's not as easy as the success business man said to build a company. Your essay is clear and well structure. I have suggestion to improve your essay, I think in the last paragraph which is conclusion, in there you write the different topic and not really related with the previous paragraph and also in the 5th paragraph, it is seems like an awkward sentences because that statement is stand alone, if you want to add that statement, I think you can put more sentences maybe it can be minor supporting sentences. Overall, great job vicky!:))
Regards,
Intan
Hi guys thank you for all of your support to me, I will give the revise in the new post due to the unavailable load from this blog
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